Reflective Journal

  1. เป็นวิธีที่ช่วยพัฒนาทักษะในเรื่องของการคิดและออกแบบประโยคที่เป็นคำพูดของเราเอง ซึ่งมีประโยชน์อย่างมากในการที่จะนำไปใช้ในชีวิตประจำวันของเรา และ ได้รับคำแนะนำต่างๆ เป็นอย่างดีในการที่จะแก้ไขงานเขียนให้ถูกต้องและอย่างดีที่สุด

2.ผมชอบในการฝึกเขียนในรูปแบบนี้เป็นอย่างมาก เพราะได้รู้จักออกแบบประโยคตามความรู้สึกของตัวเอง และ เป็นการฝึกเขียนให้ถูกหลัก มีความเข้าใจในการเขียนบทความที่ดี ต้องประกอบด้วยอะไรบ้าง ส่วนตัวแล้วรู้สึกชอบเป็นอย่างมาก เพราะเราสามารถนำมาใช้งานได้ในชีวิตจริง รวมถึงเป็นคุณสมบัติติดตัวที่ยังสามารถไปใช้ในชีวิตการทำงานอีกด้วย

3.สำหรับปัญหาที่พบ คือปัญหาในการจัดรูปแบบของบทความ การวางรูปภาพ ยังไม่อิสระตามต้องการมากนัก การดำเนินการแก้ไขบทความบางครั้งไม่แสดงผลตามที่แก้ไข 

4.ส่วนตัวแล้วสนุกกับการได้ฝึกเขียน เลยอยากเสนอให้อาจารย์มอบหมายหัวข้อให้หลากหลายยิ่งขึ้น เปิดอิสระให้นักศึกษาได้เลือกหัวข้อที่ตนเองสนใจ นอกเหนือจากที่อาจารย์กำหนด เพื่อเกิดการแลกเปลี่ยนสิ่งที่น่าสนใจ อย่างเปิดกว้าง เพื่อที่จะให้นักศึกษาได้แสดงความรู้สึกต่อบทความที่ตนเองสนใจออกมาได้อย่างธรรมชาติ ซึ่งอาจจะทำให้งานเขียนนั้นสมบูรณ์แบบอ่านเข้าใจถึงอารมณ์ของผู้เขียนได้ดียิ่งขึ้น

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2ND DRAFT B5874255

2nd Draft

" LUXURY IN MOTION "

"The Innovation of car for convenience life style"   Mercedez Benz F-015. 

   

    Benz F-015 is a concept car for the future. It's shape look like normally car in today, but they've design modern than present. This car use electric plug-in power and hydrogen fuel-cell ,So I think this kind of energy may take people to use less gasoline or petroleum. About perfomance of F-015 ,It's can run for 1,100 kilometres for top-speed at 200 kilometres per hour by electric power ,And 900 kilometres for same top speed(200 km./hour) by the fuel cell. The price is too expensive about 10.2 million baht ( Punpeng, 2016 ). 

This car are more comfortable to seat and have a high-tech gadget in car. The special thing of this car,You don't need to drive a car by your self, If you feel so tired or sometimes you drunk by the way! Because they install automatic-drive system,I think this system can fix a problems of accident on the road for a few. And we may see this car in 2030s.

Reference

Mercedez Benz. (2015). The Mercedez-Benz F 015 Luxury in Motion. from

https://www.mercedes-benz.com/en/mercedes-benz/innovation/research-vehicle-f-015-luxury-in-motion/

1st Draft "Future Car"

1ST DRAFT

" LUXURY IN MOTION " (Topic)

         

     "The Innovation of car for convenience life style"   Mercedez Benz F-015. (Topic Sentence).

   

    Benz F-015 is a concept car for the future , It's shape look like normally car in today, but they've design some part of car more different and make it look more modern than present. This car use electric plug-in power and hydrogen fuel-cell ,So I think this kind of energy may take people to use less gasoline or petroleum. About perfomance of F-015 ,It's can run for 1,100 kilometres for top-speed at 200 kilometres per hour by electric power ,And 900 kilometres for same top speed(200 km./hour) by the fuel cell. And now we don't know the real price. (Supporting Sentences)

    This car are more comfortable to seat and have a high-tech gadget in car. The special thing of this car,You don't need to drive a car by your self, If you feel so tired or sometimes you drunk by the way! Because they install automatic-drive system,I think this system can fix a problems of accident on the road for a few. And we may see this car in 2030s. (Concluding Sentences)

Outline Of "Benz F015" B5874255

Outline Of  "Benz F015" B5874255

" THE MERCEDEZ-BENZ F-015 "

- What is this car name?

This car name "Benz F-015".

- What does it look like?

It's shape look like normally car in today, but design some part more different  and make it look more modern than present.

- What kind of fuel does it use?

This car use electric plug-in power and hydrogen fuel-cell.

- How many kilometers per hour?
The top-speed of this car is 200 kilometers per hour.

- How much does it cost?

They haven't yet determined a price.

- Other detail-

This car are more comfortable to seat and have a high-tech gadget in car.

We may see this car in 2030s.

2nd Draft

" THE CAPTAIN OF ANFIELD "

"STEVEN GERRARD "the best playmaker in Liverpool F.C.

" STEVEN GEORGE GERRRAD " or we call him "Gerrard Or Stevie G".He has white skin,a short brown hair ,normal height(1.83) and good looking too . He was the captain of Liverpool football club. He plays football in midfield position and he is one of great midfield player ever in LIVERPOOL FC in my opinion and also Liverpool fanclub too I think. He won 7 football tournament all of his competitions. The highest point of his career is "The 2005 FIFA World Club Championship and he was a runner-up(2nd) . After he won the UEFA Champions league in 2005, Many clubs are interested him and they want stevie to join with them,But he still at Liverpool ,Because Liverpool is home. About his family, He got married with "Alex Curran" and they have 3 daughters. I like him ,Because I love to play football that my dad teach me all of basic of football. when I was young (about when I was only 7-8 years-old). during that time "Steven Gerrard" so proud of his career! I have watching him the way he plays ,He always make a score from shooting from outside penalty box and also by set piece (free kick) too. That's why ,He was inspire me to play football, No doubt of any reason, Why I like him. He is my Idol forever and I want to be like him.

                                       

1ST DRAFT

" THE CAPTAIN OF ANFIELD " (Topic)

"STEVEN GERRARD "the best playmaker in Liverpool F.C. (Topic Sentence)

" STEVEN GEORGE GERRRAD " or we call him "Gerrard Or Stevie G". He was the captain of Liverpool football club. He plays football in midfield position and he is one of great midfield player ever in LIVERPOOL FC in my opinion and also Liverpool fanclub too I think. He won 7 football tournament all of his competitions. The highest point of his career is "The 2005 FIFA World Club Championship and he was a runner-up(2nd) . About his family, He got married with "Alex Curran" and they have 3 daughters.(Supportingsentences)                               I like him ,Because I love to play football that my dad teach me all of basic of football. when I was young (about when I was only 7-8 years-old). during that time "Steven Gerrard" so proud of his career! I have watching him the way he plays ,He always make a score from shooting from outside penalty box and also by set piece (free kick) too. That's why ,He was inspire me to play football, No doubt of any reason, Why I like him. He is my Idol forever and I want to be like him.(Concludingsentence) 

Outline Of "STEVEN GEORGE GERRARD" B5874255

                                                                                

              STEVEN GEORGE GERRARD

                                 HIS OUTLINE :

         

# What is his name?    

         :   His name is STEVEN GEORGE GERRARD ( Full name).

# What does he look like?       

         :   He has white skin ,a short brown hair and he has normal height (1.83 m).

# What kind of sports does he play?        

         :   He plays football in midfield position.  And He's one of great midfield player ever in  LIVERPOOL FC.

# What has been his sport success?   

         :  He won 7 football tournament all of his competitions. The highest point of his career is "The 2005 FIFA World Club Championship and he was a runner-up(2nd).

# Why do you like him?              

         : I like him ,Because I love to play football that my dad teach me all of basic of football when I was young (about when I was only 7-8 years-old). during that time "Steven Gerrard" so proud of his career! I have watching him the way he plays ,He always make a score from shooting from outside penalty box and also by set piece (free kick) too. That's why ,He was inspire me to play football, No doubt of any reason, Why I like him. He is my Idol forever and I want to be like him.

# Other details : This is so sad story of Stevie G , He never won "The Barclays Premier League" Even Once. Although he almost to won Barclays Premier League season 2013-2014..