วันอาทิตย์ที่ 4 กันยายน พ.ศ. 2559

1ST DRAFT

THE CAPTAIN OF ANFIELD " (Topic)


"STEVEN GERRARD "the best playmaker in Liverpool F.C. (Topic Sentence)
" STEVEN GEORGE GERRRAD " or we call him "Gerrard Or Stevie G". He was the captain of Liverpool football club. He plays football in midfield position and he is one of great midfield player ever in LIVERPOOL FC in my opinion and also Liverpool fanclub too I think. He won 7 football tournament all of his competitions. The highest point of his career is "The 2005 FIFA World Club Championship and he was a runner-up(2nd) . About his family, He got married with "Alex Curran" and they have 3 daughters.(Supportingsentences)                               I like him ,Because I love to play football that my dad teach me all of basic of football. when I was young (about when I was only 7-8 years-old). during that time "Steven Gerrard" so proud of his career! I have watching him the way he plays ,He always make a score from shooting from outside penalty box and also by set piece (free kick) too. That's why ,He was inspire me to play football, No doubt of any reason, Why I like him. He is my Idol forever and I want to be like him.(Concludingsentence) 

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  1. เรื่อง Topic sentence ,supporting sentence และ concluding sentence ครบถ้วน การเรียงประโยคมีความงอดคล้องกัน และถูกต้องตามหลักการเขียน

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  2. - What does he look like?
    - โดยรวมๆแล้วเขียนได้ดีครับ :)

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