1st Draft "Future Car"

1ST DRAFT

" LUXURY IN MOTION " (Topic)

         

     "The Innovation of car for convenience life style"   Mercedez Benz F-015. (Topic Sentence).

   

    Benz F-015 is a concept car for the future , It's shape look like normally car in today, but they've design some part of car more different and make it look more modern than present. This car use electric plug-in power and hydrogen fuel-cell ,So I think this kind of energy may take people to use less gasoline or petroleum. About perfomance of F-015 ,It's can run for 1,100 kilometres for top-speed at 200 kilometres per hour by electric power ,And 900 kilometres for same top speed(200 km./hour) by the fuel cell. And now we don't know the real price. (Supporting Sentences)

    This car are more comfortable to seat and have a high-tech gadget in car. The special thing of this car,You don't need to drive a car by your self, If you feel so tired or sometimes you drunk by the way! Because they install automatic-drive system,I think this system can fix a problems of accident on the road for a few. And we may see this car in 2030s. (Concluding Sentences)